A Plea for Help: Story Idea

So... I failed at the whole Christmas blog thing last year but I gave it a good go for someone who isn't used to documenting things. On the other hand I could have probably posting something about something or other in the past year... sorry bout ghosting.

I'm back though, and although this post will have nothing to do with christmas or music it does have to do with a story I've got on my mind. I have the bare bones of the story and four chapters done but it needs work and I need help. So, I'm gonna summarize what my idea is below and following it a list of things I need help with. If you are interested please, oh please put a comment or email me or contact me in some way, I am desperate.

Summary:

The story is told from a first person point of view of a seventeen year old albino female who has lived a pretty sheltered life until her father passes and her mom gets a new job in a small town. Unbeknownst to the narrator she is the subject of a prophecy and a werewolf (un-shifting). The prophecy tells how an albino of great power will come and destroy the cruelest evil before it has a chance to consume ultimate power and bring an end to were-life forever. Two weeks before winter formal she's kidnapped by a man with glowing amber eyes whose black swirling tattoos glow red when he is mad. She undergoes a week of his torture and cruelty but her stubbornness and sheer will soften him towards her and she begins to learn more about her dark capture and the secrets of his pack - with the help of his secret mate and beta.

What I Need Help With:

1. Editor
2. Prophecy writer
3. Help creating the character behaviours and mannerisms (including speech patterns) for the beta
4. I don't want this to be cheesy, but angsty, dark with a not jovial but still pleasant ending. In other words I want the evil and ultimate power to be the main character (the narrator's dark capture) but I don't know how to do that without making it super cheesy.

So if you think you can help me send me a line and hopefully we can work together. I do prefer to use Google Docs to do my writing (especially co-op stories). Hopefully when the story is done I will be posting it on Wattpad with credit of the story going to all who wrote and helped in the process. As for actual publishing - I wish but highly unlikely.

Thank You for your time. See you next time,
Miss Nobody